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Essay
Workplace
Professor Stevens, English 21 |
Essay:
Workplace
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| The 1st paragraph in
red
(introduction) reflects the four
Sub-Topics in yellow.
The next four paragraphs expand the areas in yellow with details and/or examples
(white circles). Please see the sample below. |
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| Clustering or
diagramming:
Sample of brainstorming and
organization |
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The actual
organization and writing would look something like this:
- Paragraph #1: three to four
sentences are created from the "yellow" circles. For example:
"Working in a production plant was the
worst job I ever had. I had terrible bosses who were awful to
work with. The work was hard and boring as well as noisy. But
the worst was the lack of dental and health insurance and not being
paid enough to live on." The sentences in the BLUE
would be your "introductory paragraph."
- Paragraph #2: Five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
bad pay.
- Paragraph #3: Five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
hard work.
- Paragraph #4: five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
bad
bosses.
- Paragraph #4: five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
poor
working conditions.
- Paragraph #4: Two to six sentences
that restate what you said in Paragraph #1, the introductory
paragraph.
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Clustering or
diagramming:
Blank Cluster Chart.
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| Use the blank cluster chart
below to generate an essay of your own. Keep the topic simple and
your sentences uncomplicated. To communicate one does not have to
have long sentences with complex words. Keep your writing simple,
and your essay will impart what you are trying to communicate. |
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Workplace Positive things about my job:
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Pay |
Benefits |
Fellow workers |
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Team players |
Work hours |
Work area |
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Entertaining |
Rewarding |
Pastime, hobby |
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Breaks |
Learn new stuff |
Overtime |
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Vacation |
Bonus |
Bosses |
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Management |
Flexible schedule |
Easy work |
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Stable |
Discipline boo rules |
Safe |
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Clothing requirements |
Discounts |
drive to work |
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Negative things about my job:
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Noisy |
Dirty restroom |
Gossips |
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Late |
Clothing rules |
Complainers |
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No breaks |
Unequal pay |
Raises |
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Training |
Too much work |
Coworkers |
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Not tolerant |
Racist |
Bad schedule |
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Pay |
Promotions |
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