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Essay
Getting Sick
Professor Stevens, English 21 |
Essay:
Getting Sick
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| The 1st paragraph in
Green
(introduction) reflects the four
Sub-Topics in pink.
The next three paragraphs expand the areas in pink with details and/or examples
(white circles). Please see the sample below. |
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| Clustering or
diagramming:
Sample of brainstorming and
organization |
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The actual
organization and writing would look something like this:
- Paragraph #1: three to four
sentences are created from the "yellow" circles. For example:
"There are several reasons why I get
sick all the time. Not getting enough sleep decreases and poor
diet lowers my resistance. Touching germ infected things,
also, transports a bug." The sentences in the
BLUE above would be your "introductory paragraph."
- Paragraph #2: Five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
sleep.
- Paragraph #3: Five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
touching things.
- Paragraph #4: five to six sentences
that explain and provide examples about
bad
diet.
- Paragraph #4: Two to five sentences
that restate what you said in Paragraph #1, the introductory
paragraph.
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Clustering or
diagramming:
Blank Cluster Chart.
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| Use the blank cluster chart
below to generate an essay of your own. Keep the topic simple and
your sentences uncomplicated. To communicate one does not have to
have long sentences with complex words. Keep your writing simple,
and your essay will impart what you are trying to communicate. |
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