ESSAY
Prom

Professor Stevens, English 21


 
Essay: Prom
Clustering or diagramming is an excellent strategy to generate ideas and organize your essay.  In clustering lines and circles are used to show relationships between the Subject/Topic--Sub-Topic--Details.  The Diagram below is an essay with four paragraphs. 

The 1st paragraph in blue (introduction) reflects the two Sub-Topic in red.  The next two paragraphs will expand the areas in red with Details/examples in white circles.  Please see the sample below.

 

Clustering or diagramming: Sample of brainstorming and organization

The actual organization and writing would look something like this:
  1. Paragraph #1: Two to three sentences are created from the "blue/red" circles.  For example: "My prom was not quite what I hoped it would be.  I had high expectations for what I assumed would happen.  But the actual event did not meet my expectations."  The sentences in the quotes would be your "introductory paragraph."
  2. Paragraph #2: Five to six sentences that explain and provide examples about what I expected my prom to be like.
  3. Paragraph #3: Five to six sentences that explain and provide examples why my prom did not quite meet my expectations.
  4. Paragraph #4: Two to three sentences that restate what you said in Paragraph #1 the introductory paragraph.
Clustering or diagramming: Blank Cluster Chart. 
Use the blank cluster chart below to generate an essay of your own.  Keep the topic simple and your sentences uncomplicated.  To communicate one does not have to have long sentences with complex words.  Keep your writing simple, and your essay will impart what you are trying to say.