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Understanding an Assigned Prompt
You may be expected to respond to a
"prompt." Your writing assignment most likely will include certain key words that will suggest the content and structure of
your writing assignment. A prompt is a question or statement that
aims to stimulate your thinking, so you can come up with something to write on.
Generally, every writing prompt contains a key word. So, if you are
expected to respond to a specific prompt, such as:
"Discuss the positive characteristics one
would expect to find in a good friend,"
The key word "discuss" (see below)
tells you what kind of answer you should create. Here is a list of some key
words commonly found in writing and what they will mean to you when you respond
to your prompt:
Analyze:
Separate out the parts and show how they relate to
the whole. For example, whether you are asked to analyze a poem, story, or play,
you will need to look at individual elements such as
point of view,
setting,
character,
plot,
imagery or
symbolism, and
motif or
theme. See how each of these elements contributes to the overall meaning of
the work.
Argue:
Give
reasons for or against. Be sure to use specific examples to back up your points.
Compare and contrast:
These words often appear together but not
always. If you are asked to compare, show the similarities and the differences.
If you are asked to contrast, show only the differences.
Describe:
Write about a subject in detail, often so that the
reader gets a clear mental picture or image of what you are describing.
Discuss:
Write about a subject in detail, giving reasons and
examples.
Summarize:
State the main ideas briefly, leaving out specific
examples.
Selecting Your Own Topic
On the other hand, you may be give the freedom to
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First, choose a subject
that interests you, or you know at least 15-25 details about it,
e.g., cats.
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Then try to narrow
the subject down to something you can write about knowledgeably. For
example, you have a cat, and you know a lot about siamese cats based on your experience of owning one.
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Now come up with a statement about your topic,
siamese cats. "Siamese cats are the
greatest variety of cats." This will be your topic sentence, which also
has an attitude--"greatest." You must have an attitude (great, good, bad,
magnificent, crazy, etc.) in order to write about something.
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To
write your paper, answer the question "why" at least f15-25 times. A
siamese cat is: friendly, good natured, sensitive, playful, etc. Each on
of these "why" words will translate into a sentence with an example.
Hence, if you are asked to find a topic on your own.
You may find it difficult. So, give yourself plenty of time to think about what you'd like to do. Trying to answer questions you have about a particular subject may lead you to a good paper idea.
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What subject(s) are you interested in?
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What interests you most about a particular subject?
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Is there anything you wonder about or are puzzled about with regard to that subject?
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Lastly, address the
following during the process: how, what, when, where, why.
Be sure your topic is narrow enough so that you can write about it in detail in the number of pages that you are allowed. For example, say you are asked to write a 1-page
paper about someone in your family. Since you only have a limited number of pages, you may want to focus on one particular characteristic of that person, or one particular incident from that person's life, rather than trying to write about that person's entire life. Having a narrow focus will help you write a more interesting paper.
Too general:
I have a sister. Revised:
My sister is my best friend.
Similarly, you may be asked to write a 5-page paper about
disciplining children. Again, since you only have a limited number of pages, you may choose to focus on one particular
type of discipline, rather than trying to talk about discipline in general.
Too general:
Discipline of the world. Revised:
The five major ways to discipline.
One method for narrowing down your topic is called
brainstorming. Brainstorming is a useful way to let ideas you didn't know you had come to the surface.
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Sit down with a pencil and paper, or at your computer, and write whatever comes into your head about your topic, no matter how confused or disorganized.
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Keep writing for a short
but specific amount of time, say 5-10 minutes. Don't stop to change what you've written or to correct spelling or grammar errors.
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After a few minutes, read through what you have written. You will probably
cross out a lot of it, but some of what you've written may give you an ideas
about the sentences/paragraph you are going to write.
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Do some more brainstorming
with others to see what else you can come up with.
Organize Your Ideas
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Develop an outline to organize your ideas. An outline shows your main ideas and the order in which you are going to write about them.
Click here to see some sample outlines.
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Write down all the main ideas. -
List the subordinate ideas below the
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Avoid any repetition of ideas.
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Every essay or paper is made up of three parts:
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Introduction
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Body
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Conclusion
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The introduction is the first paragraph of the paper. It often begins with a general statement about the topic and ends with a more specific statement of the main idea of your paper. The purpose of the introduction is to
let the reader know what the topic is
and inform the reader about your point of view
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The body of the paper follows the introduction. It consists of a
number of paragraphs in which you develop your ideas in detail.
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Limit each paragraph to one main idea. (Don't try to talk about more than one idea per paragraph.)
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Prove your points continually by using specific examples and quotations.
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Use
transition words to ensure a smooth flow of ideas from paragraph to paragraph.
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The conclusion is the last paragraph of the paper. Its purpose is to
summarize your main points, leaving out specific examples
and restate the main idea of the paper
Revise the First Draft
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Just as an essay is made up of
related paragraphs that develop a central point, a paragraph is made up of
related sentences that develop a central point. If a sentence in a paragraph
does not provide evidence for the main idea of the paragraph, delete it,
rewrite it, or move it to another paragraph.
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Check to make sure you have not
accidentally left out an important point. If so, add a sentence or paragraph
to clarify your meaning or provide further evidence for your main point.
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Check to make sure that all your
subordinate ideas support the main idea. If you have accidentally included
something that does not support the main idea, delete it.
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Try to set aside your draft for a day or two before revising. This makes it easier to view your work objectively and see any gaps or problems.
Revising involves rethinking your ideas, refining your arguments, reorganizing paragraphs, and rewording sentences. You may need to develop your ideas in more detail, give more evidence to support your claims, or delete material that is unnecessary. For more advice on revising and a sample revision, click
After you have written your
first draft, you will need to revise it. Read your draft carefully to make sure
that it is well organized.
Remember, an essay is a group of
related paragraphs about one main idea. The introduction states the main idea.
The body paragraphs contain the subordinate ideas that support the main idea.
The conclusion restates the main idea and indicates the end.
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If ideas don't flow in a logical
sequence from paragraph to paragraph, move the paragraphs around until your main
points fall into a clear pattern. For example, you may want to organize your
ideas chronologically, according to how things happened from start to finish in
time, or you may want to talk about your ideas in order of their importance.
Of course, you should organize your
ideas in an outline long before you sit down to write. If you need to, you can
change your outline as you write your essay.
Read your paper out loud. This sometimes makes it easier to identify writing that is awkward or unclear.
Have somebody else read the paper and tell you if there's anything that's unclear or confusing.
Proofread the Final Draft
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Look for careless errors such as misspelled words and incorrect
punctuation and
capitalization.
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Errors are harder to spot on a computer screen than on paper. If you type your paper on a computer, print out a copy to proofread. Remember, spell checkers and grammar checkers don't always catch errors, so it is best not to rely on them too much.
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While the classic five paragraph essay is a
form seldom if ever used by professional
writers, it is commonly assigned to students
to help them organize and develop their
ideas in writing. It can also be a very
useful way to write a complete and clear
response to an essay question on an exam. It
has, not surprisingly, five paragraphs:
We'll look at each type of paragraph, and at
transitions, the glue that holds them
together.
Introduction
The
introduction should start with a general
discussion of your subject and lead to a
very specific statement of your main
point, or thesis. Sometimes an essay
begins with a "grabber," such as a
challenging claim, or surprising story
to catch a reader's attention. The
thesis should tell in one (or at most
two) sentence(s), what your overall
point or argument is, and briefly, what
your main body paragraphs will be about.
For example,
in an essay about the importance of
airbags in cars, the introduction might
start with some information about car
accidents and survival rates. It might
also have a grabber about someone who
survived a terrible accident because of
an airbag. The thesis would briefly
state the main reasons for recommending
airbags, and each reason would be
discussed in the main body of the essay.
Main Body Paragraphs
Each main
body paragraph will focus on a single
idea, reason, or example that supports
your thesis. Each paragraph will have a
clear topic sentence (a mini thesis that
states the main idea of the paragraph)
and as much discussion or explanation as
is necessary to explain the point. You
should try to use details and specific
examples to make your ideas clear and
convincing.
Conclusion
Your
conclusion begins with a restatement of
your main point; but be sure to
paraphrase, not just repeat your thesis
sentence. Then you want to add some
sentences that emphasize the importance
of the topic and the significance of
your view. Think about what idea or
feeling you want to leave your reader
with. The conclusion is the reverse of
the introduction in that it starts out
very specific and becomes a bit more
general as you finish.
Transitions
connect your paragraphs to one another,
especially the main body ones. It's not
effective to simply jump from one idea
to the next; you need to use the end of
one paragraph and/or the beginning of
the next to show the relationship
between the two ideas.
Between each
paragraph and the one that follows, you
need a transition. It can be built in to
the topic sentence of the next
paragraph, or it can be the concluding
sentence of the first. It can even be a
little of both. To express the
relationship between the two paragraphs,
think about words and phrases that
compare and contrast.
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Does the
first paragraph tell us a pro and
the second a con?
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Does the
second paragraph tell us something
of greater significance?
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An
earlier historical example?
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A
different kind of consideration?
(money versus time).
Think about
your paragraph topics and brainstorm
until you find the most relevant links
between them. Please keep in mind that
transitional words cannot be used as
punctuation; they are "nothing-words."
They are words to clarify what you are
writing about, but as far as punctuation
goes, they do "nothing."
You'll also
want some kind of transition from the
last paragraph to your conclusion. One
way is to sum up your third body
paragraph with some reminders of your
other paragraphs. You don't need to
restate the topics fully (that comes in
the conclusion) but you can refer to a
detail, or example, or character as a
way of pulling your ideas together.
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